“Kumar and Hans, you’ve made a long journey here, welcome. This makes five of us, there’s one more left.” The bleached hair man said. Kumar shook his head, “We can’t trust some guy who can’t even show up on time. Five of us are an enough.” “We only said we meet tonight, we never agreed on time,” said Ox. Bleached haired smiled at them, “Careless of us wasn’t it?” Jax started to argue, “This is foolish, we can’t get anything done like this.” “I am already here.” Everyone looks up but there is no one in the room. “Hiding in the ceiling, clever trick,” Bleached nodded. “My name is Juba I’m pleased to meet you.” Kumar yelled out, “What do you mean please to meet you!? Come on out of there!” “That’s right at least show us your face,” Ox agreeing.
The bleached hair man shrugged, “Well that’s fine. We who all have reason to hate MakenZero are gathered here for revenge. We are the Six Comrades.” There was a dramatic pause. “The Six Comrades, that’s not a very striking name.” Hans frowned. The man replied to what Hans said, “It hardly matters what we call ourselves. We are Six Comrades now. Soon we’ll be united against a single enemy. MakenZero is now living around here from what I hear. As long as MakenZero believes to be so called innocent now, no matter how we brutally kill him, our revenge will be meaningless. Revenge begins when your opponent knows you will have retribution. We are gathered here to run him down and make him face the sins of his past. If we can do this, we six will be separated, and the task of revenge will fall to the swiftest. For do we not all wish to deliver the final blows with our own hands?”
Jax grunted, “I see.” “So the strongest gets to give him the final blow!” Kumar laughed. “I don’t object but what is our plan? Hans asked. “I’ve given that some thought. I don’t mean to stand in front while you do all the work. We will all fulfill our responsibilities, Mr. Hans.” “I said I had no objections.” “I am sorry, let me explain first.” Later everyone left except for the bleached hair man and the one they called Ox spoke. “Perfect. You call them comrades, but you can do anything you want with these four. Telling them they could give the final blow themselves worked like a charm. The thought of killing MakenZero is irresistible bait.” “I want to thank you for you cooperation.” “It’s nothing. I’m like you. I don’t want to take revenge by killing MakenZero.” “Yes. In the end death is only an instant of pain. That will not fulfill HER last wish or dispel my hatred. I will plunge MakenZero into the living hell that we went through. This will be Enishi Jovan’s true revenge!”
Maken and Swipe were on the floor looking at maps in one of their rooms drinking tea. “The police concluded that the attack wasn’t aimed at Rica’s family’s restaurant. Yet it was a test or misfiring of an illicitly manufactured gun by a person who despised the government.” Maken told Swipe while taking a sip of his tea. “As usual you can’t depend on those guys for anything.” “It’s not their fault. They do not know the circumstances.” “What about those circumstances, are you going to tell Vivi and the others?” “No. I don’t think so. I caused everyone a lot of worry with the problem with the Nekam incident. I don’t want to cause any more unnecessarily. My opponents have turned their hearts to revenge. On this point they will probably command more force than the Ten Sword AnQels. We should avoid another dangerous situation like the defense of the on the headquarters where we were last time. It’s best to keep the others out of any fighting.”
Swipe leaned back on his hands. “Well then there’s not much else to say. In this town the only places you hang out much are here, the clinic, and the restaurant. If we each take one place, we’re covered. Finally your being antisocial comes in handy.” Maken giving him a dirty look then speaking, “I can’t deny it, but you don’t have to say it like that.” “The one thing I’m really worried about is Rica and her family still being the target.” “It’s all right. Rica’s family wants to keep this quiet, so they’re not relying solely on the police. They’ve hired a private group to guard them. As for - - sh! Hide the map!” “Maken I’m coming in.”
Vivi came in seeing Maken and Swipe “innocently” drinking tea. She looked at them both, “Well? What map?” “Oh, what were we doing? Nothing. Maps? It’s fun to look at maps, isn’t it,” Maken horribly playing it off being caught in something. “He’s kidding. We were just trying to figure out which STRIP CLUBS to hit in the red light district tonight!” Swipe slapped him on the back a few times. “What the hel—“Maken looked at him with a crazy look. Vivi started to blush then roll up on of the maps whacking Maken a few times. “Don’t talk like that in front of Swipe and Makenzie! How could you! Swipe’s only a teenager!” Maken said under his breath, “Swipe.” Swipe whispered back, “What? If you want a woman to stop asking questions, this always works. We aren’t all good boys like you!”
Vivi started talking again, “Oh and Rica will be staying with us after she’s done some work on the restaurant.” “That sets my mind at ease a little.” “Sets your mind at ease?” She got suspicious. Swipe whacked up, “Ow! Reflex again, I need to go see Megan at her clinic see you later. “Alright take care.” Maken rubbing his head after the beatings he got from them both. Vivi went out closing the door, “They’re hiding something I really don’t care. He always does anyways.”
(Real entry)
I have to say I was laughing pretty hard at this. It was so serious at the beginning now it’s just came out freaking ridiculous at the end. But what do you guys think? Now we find out who’s planning this attack on Maken. He keeps referring to HER, The girl that Maken killed and went to visit her grave after the Nekam battle. Seems like he has a lot of relationship with her some how.
I wouldn’t mind seeing someone trying to figure it out and replying to me lol. I rewrote my essays that I that I wasn’t doing well in my English class. Yet what does this do now? So I see I made a lot of errors that’s always likes that. I know I know everyone is getting a bit impatient and wanting to see some action. It’s coming! I promise! Try to figure out what’s going to happen!
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