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"I've ran away my whole life, but now my running has become a talent that no one can surpass me in.
MakenZero Stories Finishing Up A Man's Back: Quarrel
Its almost been a year since I last wrote a MakenZero story. They are usually heavily based from Kenshin Manga translations just name changes and a few modern touches from me. But I owe a lot of people for not finishing the story. So I'm going to do that. At least this part of the story arc. What's going to happen it'll probably be split up into parts again. But I'll have to skip a quite a bit of stuff. The three front battle stuff and all. I will slightly go into flashback a little. But this is going to start when they head for the island to face the guy. Of course the ever infamous Rory Jones will make it supenseful as possible. I might suck at the writing a bit since it's really been a while. But here goes. And sorry it's so long for in the middle of the morning.
A Man's Back: Quarrel
The crew finally landed on the island. Vincent scanned the trees glancing left and right, "There is no ambush here, but that doesn't mean we won't meet with one on the island." "So are we going to charge in or sneak in?" Swipe with his silver hair reflecting in the sun putting his left fist into his right hand warming up his hand. Maken takes a deep breath and yells, "Enishi! Can you hear me!? It's me! I've come to take Vivene back! Come out here! Under this sun--here and now-- let's settle this!"
There was only silence. Maken spoke again to everyone around him, "We'll wait for half a hour for Enishi to respond. This is personal grievance. If it's possible, I want everyone else out of this." The man beside Maken in the police uniform closed his eyes for a second and spoke, "Hmph. And if he does not come out?" Maken responded but did not look at any of them, "Then we charge at full speed taking Vivi back by force." Swipe smirked, "That's what I like to hear." Megan was fixing all her medince packs on herself to carry around, "You're right. It's just that any careless action would waste Maken's strength. Makenzie spoke up as well, "But will Vivene be okay?" "We don't need to worry about her. Enishi's plans are in ruin I can't imagine him wanting to add to his problems," Vincent popping his collars to his trench coat as it waved in the little breeze. "Okay so then it's settled," Nyx nodded.
Inside the mansion. Enishi sits motionless, while a business man looked out the window with binoculars, flanked by his bodyguards. The business man turned towards Enishi, "Did you hear that? There's one cop with him, but that's your enemy down there. If you want to settle things now is the time. Once the main police force gets here the house forces will attack. Now's when you can still keep it a personal matter." "Whatever else happens, my fight will be settled today. It's a little early, but I'll give you all of my arms dealing organization to you as I promised. So. Get the hell out of my face," Enishi spoke softly.
The business man tapped his binoculars against his hand angrily, "What why are you--," Enishi spoke again, "You bother me." "I can't do that. We'll part ways today, but the fact that as of today you're in charge isn't going to go away. If y ou're defeated in taken in by the police, that will naturally have a great effect on the organization. I'm not going to sit back and accept a house of cards. Until the police force and your personal matter are dealt with, I can't inherit your postion. If I withdraw now--," The veins in Enishi's neck and face are started to bluge, "Did you think for an insant that I would lose? You have half a hour to disappear! If you don't, the house forces as well as I, myself will destroy you." The business man hesitated, sweat started to form on his brow. "Disappear!" "I understand please excuse me," the business man stiffly moved away from him.
Enishi hears a rapid knocking at the door, he opens it to see Vivi. "Shut up," he tosses her a bundle of clothes, "It's a change of clothes, be ready in half a hour." Vivi spoke up, "I heard his voice. He's here." Enishi with a little chackle, "Yes. He's come for me to kill him." Vivi in the back of her mind said Maken's name. The business man was walking through the pines with his four body guards surrounding him. They all spoke saying one thing or another. "Are we going to run with our tails between our legs?" The man shook his head, "We have no choice. Ordinarly you four could overcome him by force. But he's different now. That face... His veins standing out like that. He could have taken the four of you and a whole regiment besides. No one can match Enishi with his true strength unleashed. So yes we're retreating. But. There's only one way on and off this island. If we pull out we'll be impossible to avoid. We'll naturally run into his enemies. We would even if we didn't want to. So in return for waiting the fifteen years for him to "give" me this organization, I think I might take the bother of his revenge off his hands."
On the beach everyone was waiting. "All right, it's been half a hour, let's go!" Swipe yelled out. Megan checked her watch, "Swipe. It's been less than ten minutes you idiot." "Someone's getting a little tense," Makenzie smiled a little rubbing her tattoo sealed arm. But she was a bit tense herself, it's been a long time since they last were together all of them. Most of these people with Maken now have been sworn enemies or even rivals to him most of his life. Only wanting to take his life. This was definately the turn arounds of all turn arounds. She wondered if she gotten more stronger too. A lot's happen with everyone especially Maken. Wolf Brigade Zage puts out his ciggarate as he watched the trees, "You may say you don't want to involve anyone in this, but it looks like the enemy isn't naive. The business man was walking towards them with his four bodyguards now. "So that's Enishi?" Nyx asked. "Hardly! That's a totally different person," Swipe getting hot-blooded as usual. Zage looked a bit closer, "From the looks of it, I think that's his number two, Mr. Wright." The body guards broke out into huge grins. Mr. Wright spoke, "Lose control," as he laughed a little. Swipe's silver eyes gleamed a bit, "What are your four ugly ass faces so happy about? If you're here to stop Maken's fight, we're here to take you out by force!"
A Man's Back: Quarrel
The crew finally landed on the island. Vincent scanned the trees glancing left and right, "There is no ambush here, but that doesn't mean we won't meet with one on the island." "So are we going to charge in or sneak in?" Swipe with his silver hair reflecting in the sun putting his left fist into his right hand warming up his hand. Maken takes a deep breath and yells, "Enishi! Can you hear me!? It's me! I've come to take Vivene back! Come out here! Under this sun--here and now-- let's settle this!"
There was only silence. Maken spoke again to everyone around him, "We'll wait for half a hour for Enishi to respond. This is personal grievance. If it's possible, I want everyone else out of this." The man beside Maken in the police uniform closed his eyes for a second and spoke, "Hmph. And if he does not come out?" Maken responded but did not look at any of them, "Then we charge at full speed taking Vivi back by force." Swipe smirked, "That's what I like to hear." Megan was fixing all her medince packs on herself to carry around, "You're right. It's just that any careless action would waste Maken's strength. Makenzie spoke up as well, "But will Vivene be okay?" "We don't need to worry about her. Enishi's plans are in ruin I can't imagine him wanting to add to his problems," Vincent popping his collars to his trench coat as it waved in the little breeze. "Okay so then it's settled," Nyx nodded.
Inside the mansion. Enishi sits motionless, while a business man looked out the window with binoculars, flanked by his bodyguards. The business man turned towards Enishi, "Did you hear that? There's one cop with him, but that's your enemy down there. If you want to settle things now is the time. Once the main police force gets here the house forces will attack. Now's when you can still keep it a personal matter." "Whatever else happens, my fight will be settled today. It's a little early, but I'll give you all of my arms dealing organization to you as I promised. So. Get the hell out of my face," Enishi spoke softly.
The business man tapped his binoculars against his hand angrily, "What why are you--," Enishi spoke again, "You bother me." "I can't do that. We'll part ways today, but the fact that as of today you're in charge isn't going to go away. If y ou're defeated in taken in by the police, that will naturally have a great effect on the organization. I'm not going to sit back and accept a house of cards. Until the police force and your personal matter are dealt with, I can't inherit your postion. If I withdraw now--," The veins in Enishi's neck and face are started to bluge, "Did you think for an insant that I would lose? You have half a hour to disappear! If you don't, the house forces as well as I, myself will destroy you." The business man hesitated, sweat started to form on his brow. "Disappear!" "I understand please excuse me," the business man stiffly moved away from him.
Enishi hears a rapid knocking at the door, he opens it to see Vivi. "Shut up," he tosses her a bundle of clothes, "It's a change of clothes, be ready in half a hour." Vivi spoke up, "I heard his voice. He's here." Enishi with a little chackle, "Yes. He's come for me to kill him." Vivi in the back of her mind said Maken's name. The business man was walking through the pines with his four body guards surrounding him. They all spoke saying one thing or another. "Are we going to run with our tails between our legs?" The man shook his head, "We have no choice. Ordinarly you four could overcome him by force. But he's different now. That face... His veins standing out like that. He could have taken the four of you and a whole regiment besides. No one can match Enishi with his true strength unleashed. So yes we're retreating. But. There's only one way on and off this island. If we pull out we'll be impossible to avoid. We'll naturally run into his enemies. We would even if we didn't want to. So in return for waiting the fifteen years for him to "give" me this organization, I think I might take the bother of his revenge off his hands."
On the beach everyone was waiting. "All right, it's been half a hour, let's go!" Swipe yelled out. Megan checked her watch, "Swipe. It's been less than ten minutes you idiot." "Someone's getting a little tense," Makenzie smiled a little rubbing her tattoo sealed arm. But she was a bit tense herself, it's been a long time since they last were together all of them. Most of these people with Maken now have been sworn enemies or even rivals to him most of his life. Only wanting to take his life. This was definately the turn arounds of all turn arounds. She wondered if she gotten more stronger too. A lot's happen with everyone especially Maken. Wolf Brigade Zage puts out his ciggarate as he watched the trees, "You may say you don't want to involve anyone in this, but it looks like the enemy isn't naive. The business man was walking towards them with his four bodyguards now. "So that's Enishi?" Nyx asked. "Hardly! That's a totally different person," Swipe getting hot-blooded as usual. Zage looked a bit closer, "From the looks of it, I think that's his number two, Mr. Wright." The body guards broke out into huge grins. Mr. Wright spoke, "Lose control," as he laughed a little. Swipe's silver eyes gleamed a bit, "What are your four ugly ass faces so happy about? If you're here to stop Maken's fight, we're here to take you out by force!"
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